Fishing Story Reflection
On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story is a pretty good one but a short one. To improve my writing next time I will use more similies.
On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story is a pretty good one but a short one. To improve my writing next time I will use more similies.
A great piece of writing Lachlan. You have lots of details and have used voice. Well done
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